Main Idea

Contrast
There is very minimal contrast on this. The light tan bar at the top of the page really sticks out, it's great. The title pops off the page, along with the dog, but that's about it. The poem isn't even visible and I could have changed it but I've already attempted multiple things to make it look better in any way possible and every single one of them failed. Miserably.
Alignment
The alignment isn't too terrible. It's definitely not the worst part of the finished product. Considering you cant see half of the text that I spent time on aligning, I'm going to go ahead and say the alignment is the best part of the final outcome.
Repetition
The repetition is there. Barely. The colors from the dog would have looked better together if I knew how to actually work with Dream weaver. It looks like a big disgusting blob.
Proximity
One word. Awful. There are just so many things wrong with how this turned out. The proximity is a mess, but at least it's even.
Conclusion
This sucks. Everything went wrong and I learned absolutely nothing. I love web design.
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